FEEDBACK OF FRONT COVER FIRST DRAFT

I am really pleased with all the feedback I recieved as there were plenty of really positive remarks along with alot of constructive critism of how my magazine could be improved. I have read each comment individuallly and plan to take all of the advice on board and apply it to my front cover in order to create the best possible version of my front cover. Things suh as applying more sell lines and text to the background are definitely aspects that I will experiment with as these could change the whole layout and look of the magazine and therefore won't be a definite changeto be made.